Ode to Cal transby Hector
TobarIn this story 'Ode to Cal trans' by Hector
Tobar, he tells us about the experiences and exposures he has had throughout his years with Southern California freeways such as the Hollywood freeway and the Santa Ana. He shares his memories of these passageways from the
impressionable age of 8 years old through adulthood. He spoke of being a lonely child that filled much of his time studying maps of the Southern California highways. He recalls the apartment that he lived in as a child that was 2 blocks away from the 8 lane Hollywood freeway, and his science project at Grant elementary where he realized for the first time the amount of pollution that is created by the freeway.
Tobar describes how these freeways have transformed throughout the years. He recounts his memories of the narrow two lane passage that the Santa Ana freeway once was before in was widened by Cal trans workers. He compares the efficiency of our freeways in California to those in other countries such as Iraq. He appreciates the fact that our freeways are more orderly and are governed by a set of rules, logic, and etiquette enforced by the law.
Tobar shares the respect, awareness, and
appreciation he has developed for these freeways from his years of experience with them and from the tragedies that he has witnessed. He recalls gruesome accidents that he has witnessed, and the memorial signs that used to sit along the freeway marking the location where Cal trans workers had been killed. Knowing all too closely the tragedy that these busy passages can bring, he chooses not to take the freeway to the hospital when his wife is in labor.
My favorite paragraph in the story is from page 56.
Tobar says "The freeway was a canyon of sound, something between wind and rushing water, as if the lanes were rapids filled with canoes that
occasionally blasted a horn or screeched brakes."
This reading makes me think of the Eastbound off-ramp from highway 12 in Santa Rosa to the Northbound 101 freeway entrance. You follow the wide loop of the overpass that sits above highway 101. When you are right in the middle of that overpass loop, you can see a mass of cars travelling in several different directions. Whenever I take that exit, I love it when I reach the middle point of that overpass. It feels like I'm floating on a roller coaster; high up in the air above the freeway. It's a very powerful and free feeling.
One thing that I didn't know before reading this story is how disorderly the freeways can be in other countries.
Tobar shares a story about driving around what looks like a freeway along the edge of Montevideo, Uruguay. He said "You have to dodge street vendors sprinting across your field of vision, and horse-drawn carts merging from the on ramp to the number-three lane."
Montalvo, Myths, and Dreams of Homeby Thomas Steinbeck
This story is written by a man, Thomas Steinbeck, who loves and appreciates the California area in which he lives. He first starts this story with reluctance to share "His treasures" of California with others, but towards the end, he shares with the readers his memories of the lush and beautiful Big
Sur where he had lived and grown to love. Steinbeck gives his readers a bit of history of the myths that surround California; how they came about, and how they attracted the interest of people from of the other states. He spoke of how the Spanish literary market was dying off because the reading material was boring to it's readers, and over censored by the churches. Then he told us how a man named Garcia Rodriguez
de Montalvo came along with his Spanish versions of romance novels such as '
Las Serges De
Esplandian.'
Montalvo's writing didn't die off because his work was the filled with the vision of this paradise on earth named California that was filled with wealth and resources. Many people, including Thomas Jefferson, who sponsored Lewis and Clark in their expeditions, were intrigued with this vision that
Montalvo had created, and believed in them. Steinbeck recounted the myths that surrounded his own paradise in California, the Big
Sur. These myths included the belief that the Big
Sur was the home to such creatures as Sasquatches and the Dark watchers. His grandmother believed that the Dark watchers existed, and went to great lengths to prove that they did exist. Thomas Steinbeck concludes his story by saying, "I for one believe every word. But that's what happens when you're in love."
My favorite paragraph in this story can be found on page 65. "In a lifetime of travel I have become acquainted with hundreds of people who dreamed of coming to California. Most of them couldn't have cared less about the other forty-nine states, for it was the intricate
stratification and emotional
significance of the California myth to which they clung like wide-eyed orphans."
This reading makes me think of the times I spent in the Northern California mountains exploring the magnificent and lush terrain with my father. He has always been a fan of venturing up far into the mountains to make his own camping areas away from other people. My sister and I were little girls when my dad took us way up into the Marvel Mountains, which are situated in the furthest Northern end of California; spilling into the Oregon Wilderness. During this age, we really bought into the whole myth of "Big Foot." Knowing this, my dad played along with our belief in the myth, and had a little fun with it by scaring us at night just before we went to sleep in our tent. He'd say things like "Don't leave your tent at night because Bigfoot might get you," or "Don't wander away from camp or the trails because Bigfoot might get you." I don't believe in the myth of Bigfoot anymore; I haven't for a long time. I know now that his tricky little plan was a stunt to keep us in line when we were kids so to speak.
One thing that I didn't know before reading this story is that the first myths of California were born in the early 1500's. It's hard to imagine that back in the early 1500's, people were inspired by the myths and thoughts of a paradise filled with opportunity and wealth. I believe that many people today think that California is a land of wealth and opportunity, but to know that people were first inspired by visions that were painted of California by the Spanish romance novel writer,
Montalvo, well that is amazing.
The Last Little Beach Townby Edward
HumesEdward Humes tells a story of how he came to find the last little unspoiled beach town, Seal Beach, and how he fell in love with this gem of Southern California. Humes came to California based on a mythical dream of a paradise. Upon reaching his destination though, his dream was quickly turned to reality with the sight of the think layer of smog that lined the sky, and the strings of fast food chains, gas stations, and cheap hotels that lined the highways. He reaches Crystal Cove and feels relieved that he found a place that he could be happy living, but he talks about how this paradise is quickly becoming modernized with it's strip mall, golf course, and mansions. During his drive, he had passed by Seal Beach without even noticing it because his view from the highway didn't offer anything remarkable enough to pull him in or make him want to stop. It wasn't until years later that he finally discovered Seal Beach and was drawn into it's quiet small town charm. He wanders into the towns city hall, and meets a trusting clerk named Joanne, that offers a book of information about the town. In his research of Seal Beach's history, he discovers that the town was once the talk of the coast; the place to go; the must stop destination from travel goers in the early 1900's, but the development and growth died and has been frozen since the 1960's. In the end of this story, the reality is that the town is broke and desperately need revenue. In attempt to accomplish this, the city hall approves development of homes, and tries to approve parking meters for the town as well, but towns people fought the proposal. The town people are afraid of their little gem of a town diminishing to modern development like Crystal Cove.
My favorite sentence of the story is on page 72. "I watched my plane enter a layer of air the color of an old teabag and I just wanted to cash in my ticket and go home."
This reading made me think about a trip to Los Angeles that I took back in 1995. The first thing I noticed when I neared and reached my destination, was the haze of smog that completely covered the sky. There were no crisp blue skies like here in Northern California. The sky was like this the entire time I was in Los Angeles. I felt like I was breathing thick, dirty air. I don't know if it was just my conscience, or if it was all in my head, but my lungs actually felt dirty. The scene in the area that I visited was very industrious: many buildings, a lot of roads, freeways, and traffic. It was so nice to return home to the "Clean air," blue skies, and beautiful landscape of Sonoma County after a week in Los Angeles.
One thing that I didn't know before reading this story, is that Seal Beach was the location of Cecil B. DeMille first filming of the Ten Commandments.
Surfacing by Matt Warshaw
This is a story about a Young man, Jay Moriarty, who makes his way to Maverick's point seeking the thrill of riding the "Huge and perfect" waves that were in the storms forecast that day. Moriarty catches a ride on a fishing boat, 'The Lizzie-Lynn," to the place in the water from where he wanted to begin his thrill ride. To his excitement, the waves were enormous, but he noted to himself that there was too much wind. Before exiting the Lizzy-Lynn, he watched a fellow surfer, Evan Slater, get swept sideways by the wind and disappear into the waves. Maverick's Point is a hidden beach in Half Moon Bay, that was once a shared secret among a small group of surfers. It had been making recent headlines though, for having the biggest waves apart from Hawaii. Once Moriarty was in the water and in position, a huge wave began to swell, and he was standing up on his board. A strong gust of wind carried him high into the air, and he crash down into the water. He was pushed by the force of the wave into an underwater loop, and to the oceans floor. He had to fight his way up to the surface, and wait out the second wave that was about to crash over him. He discovered that his board was broke in half. He boarded the Lizzy-Lynn to catch a break and wax up his reserve board. He was soon out in the surf again; where he successfully surfed 9 more waves.
My Favorite sentence of the reading was a quote that Warshaw used written by Buzzy Trent in 1965. You can find this quote on pages 85-86. "You hear that crack and thunder, you feel the wet spray...you just power through, hoping you won't get the ax. And then if you do make it, you get a wonderful feeling inside."
The reading made me think of how my sister and I used to risk being swept away by the oceans waves for the thrill of them crashing over our bodies. My dad and mom used to take us to the coast often, west of Sonoma county. Some of our favorite beaches that we'd visit regularly were: School House beach and Glass beach. My sister and I would follow the wave out as far as we could as it reascended from the beach, and we'd sit down and wait for the wave to come crashing back over our bodies. We didn't realize how dangerous this practice was, until one time the wave started to pull me out into the ocean with it. I wasn't strong enough to fight it, I was screaming for help, but before I knew it, my dad was in the water pulling me to the shore. You would think that the whole experience would have deterred me from doing that again, but it didn't.
One thing that I didn't know before reading this story, is that Half Moon Bay is in Northern California. I have never been there, and I didn't realize that it is only a 25 mile drive from San Fransisco.
Similarities & Differences
All three of the authors talk about places that they have a reguard for; places that hold a special place in their memories and hearts. Tobar shares his early fascination for the Southern California freeways that he grew up around as a child. He shares how he has learned and grown from the many experiences that he has had travelling these highways. Steinbeck speaks of the little place in California that he treasures the most, Big Sur, and the myths that surround his treasured place on earth. Humes talks about a quiet little town called Seal Beach; a place that he discovers and grows to cherish, years after coming to California. Finally Warshaw, who gives his readers a glimpse into the thrill and passion a young man named Jay Moriarty has for riding waves at a then unknown and hidden beach named Maverick Point. The three authors also describe in their stories the changes that each area has been through over the years. They describe how the areas have progressed, become more modernized, and have in some ways have abandoned their roots over the years. The authors share the history of these places and the myths that surround them. One of the differences that I noticed was that the first three stories were centered in areas of Southern California, whereas, the last story by Warshaw was about a place in Northern California.
My Comments on the Work of 10 Classmates
1. Andrea: In her summary of 'Love in the Time of Cholera,' Andrea said "That all of the dialogue that went on between Florentino and Fermina in their letters was the basis of the love story." I watched the movie version of this story. In this version, the acting makes you feel that Florentino's love was much stronger for Fermina than her love was for him. It focuses mostly on his love for her and less on her love for him. It is known in the movie that they exchanged many letters, but the actual content of those letters was not known. It would have been interesting to have read the words that Fermina wrote to Florentino; to see if her love for him was stronger than portrayed in the movie.
2. Terrie: When comparing
Freire with
Florentino, Terrie
acknowledges how the dedication that each has towards their passions in life can transcend across borders. The stories of these two men; their obstacles and triumphs, have reached many different people in many different places.
3. David: At the end of his summary of 'Love in the Time of Cholera,' David asks "Which is better, to have loved and lost, or rather, to have never loved at all?" In my opinion, it is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. Every moment that you spend making memories and having experiences with people that you care about are never wasted moments. You can learn a lot about yourself and about life from the
interactions that you have with others.
4. Vanessa: In Vanessa's analysis of how the story 'Love in the Time of Cholera' is a story that transcends borders, she believes that there is a very thin line between love and obsession for someone to wait and obsess over one person for so long. She thinks people who obsess over another as
Florentino did over
Fermina, may be seen as crazy. Though most people who have experienced heartbreak can move forward with their lives, there are others out there who can't and do become obsessed. Vanessa wrote, "But isn't love an obsession anyways?" I don't think so.
5. Brian: I like that Brian mentions the part of the story where
Fermina's grown daughter criticizes her for being an old women who has fallen in love. This is such a small clip of the movie but important, because it shows that love does not
discriminate. Short, tall, skinny, fat, young, or old; no matter what our physical appearances may be, we are all capable of finding love. Love is not bound by age or physical appearance.
6. Mark: Nice summary Mark. Mark's summary is brief yet without leaving out any important information. I like how Mark points out that upon his rejection from
Fermina and her choice to marry Dr.
Urbino,
Florentino didn't just lay down and die. He was driven to become a successful man in society like Dr.
Urbino. Also, when comparing
Freire's ideas to
Florentino's, Mark had a different response than most of the other students. Instead of comparing the compassion and
determination that both men had for their causes, he noted how they both saw importance in
communication between people and cultures, like the young illiterate couple that
Florentino wrote love letters for in the movie; so that he could help them communicate with each other.
7. Aloma: Aloma said in her summary that "
Florentino's love for
Fermina could be compared to
Florentino's being plagued by the disease of Cholera."
Aloma mentions that
Florentino's love sickness causes him to suffer, and affects him emotionally and physically throughout the story. I noticed that there were several images of the suffering caused by cholera throughout the movie as if the disease was set as a backdrop for the type of suffering that
Florentino endured because of his love for
Fermina. Very interesting. Good observation
Aloma.
8. Mary Lou: Mary Lou believes that the ideas in the movie 'Love in the Time of Cholera' in comparison to
Freire, shows how both have influenced the field of arts and history. She said " This movie has shown how a love story that takes place in a Caribbean port in the late 1800's can be appreciated an understood throughout the world." I think it is great that we can read a story such as
Florentino's or
Freire's; stories that have taken place previously in time, and still appreciate them today for what they offer us in the present time.
9. Hilary: I thought that it was good that Hilary mentioned the sound of the "Death bells" that
Florentino heard one day while lying in the arms of a young woman. This scene is depicted in the beginning and at the end of the movie. It shows
Florentino's dedication to his promise to wait for Fermina's husband to die so that he could reclaim his love once again. It's almost as if Florentino knows it is the Doctor that died when the "Death bells" sound-a sort of intuition.
10. Marissa: I agree with Marissa, that though 'Love in the Time of Cholera' is an intriguing story, it is not very practical. To save your love and wait for the man or woman of your dreams for over 50 is borderline crazy. At least though, the character of Florentino didn't completely shut down or kill himself. He did take steps to become more successful in his career, and he did pursue many opportunities and experiences in his life while waiting for his beloved Fermina, even if it was with over 600 women.